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Honorable Mention
Outside Magnolia Park
Gary Blankenship

(The fourth in a series of transformations of Wang Wei’s River Wang poems.)

A River Transformed IV: After Wang Wei’s Hsin-i Village

Outside Magnolia Park

Mountains and mounds of shaded thicket,
scarlet and indigo foliage left untended
behind concertina wire and “no trespassing” signs,
unwanted and unneeded, cut from the city’s conscience.

I cup my hands to drink from a broken fountain;
you collect pigeon feathers and seeds
to be tossed when you decide
to travel along the river, unencumbered.

Calyx –
If the blind cannot follow his steps,
nor deaf hear his silence, if the scholar guided
through centuries fails, how can I assume I’ll succeed?

Hibiscus petals, paper, silk, plastic,
pressed in the pages of a water-stained book.

*

The literal translation by Wai-Lim Yip: Hsin-i Village

tree tip hibiscus* -- flower
mountain middle set-forth red calyx
stream hut/home still/silent no man
profuse- profuse open and fall

*also translated as magnolia and water lily


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